Wednesday, March 24, 2010

Help needed

Guys i humbly request your help and opinion on this one. I think i have potentially a good piece here, but sometimes while tightening details i end up losing the vitality of the first initial sketch. So here's my question should i keep; - in a painterly fashion, tightening this whole thing up? should i do a line drawing on top of it? What can be improved in terms of composition and story, if there is one. Thanks!

1 comment:

  1. you're right, you do have a really powerful image going on here. one worth polishing up a few focal points like the gun, i like seeing it and the fremen were described as good machinists so it could be a tight design.


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