Saturday, February 22, 2014

capture the worm - WIP

I humbly ask you guys to rip it apart if you see mistakes or things that need to be improved. Please.


  1. Lookin great man! The only thing what is a bit weird for me compositionally is the lower guys. I can`t really point a finger on it, just how they are cut seems strange...
    You can also try to add a bit more contrast and details around the worms head to push the focal area.
    Just my two cents though, its awesome already. :)

  2. I like the focal point and all the deets! I think compositionally you could crop out some sky right now, the horizon line is nearly dead center. I wouldn't want to lose the sky colors though I think they're rad.


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